Sleeping Valor

9/10 It rhymes! :D I love it.

Wow. I think this is the first time I've read a story written in present tense with a first person POV. Cool. You have a nice writing style, and you ...

I'm glad you think she's like-able. I was thinking about her personality and got scared maybe she was kind of dull (not so much in the prologue, but in chapter ...

I was trying to edit a post in the storybook forum, but every time I pressed submit the page just refreshed itself as if I'd only just pressed the 'edit ...

Chapter One The King and the Levan Gem have been taken by an assassin known as 'The Shade'. He resides in he realm of Ghalen, across the sea.

Chapter One --They are enlisted to handle bandits! --They travel to the coast where they board a fine ship and set sail. --They arrive finally on the other side of ...

The Bandit King He's got all the bandit leaders reporting to him, and is actually coordinating their attacks. In total, he has 5 bandit gangs, each counting 25 men. He ...

Here’s what’s happened so far. Chapter 1: Setting Out --Answering Advisor Pens' summons, our heroes gather in the capital. They have been promised an audience with Pens in the morning. ...

Here's a short description of all our characters, for current PCs who find themselves forgetting who they are talking to and for new member who want to join. TNcowgirl Storm ...

Storybook NOTICE Woot. It turns out the golems were a test of your skill! Pens is very pleased that you all passed. ^_^ CURRENTLY BEING DISCUSSED IN THE DT Okies. ...

Okay, I will probably start this later today. (yay! Snow day!) Here's my character! Name: Lea (but her real name is Julia) Age: 19 Race: Human (with a little elven ...

Tamora's very good at making sense. I didn't even realize I'd read the second book until I had finished it. She tends to do a quick review, so you should ...

Trickster's choice was good. I loved all of Tamora's Tortall books (I have a shelf just for them ^_^). Hmm...but let me see if I can remember the plot. Hope ...

Thanks guys! I know it's very choppy, I promise at some point I will fix that--just like all the other things I keep saying I will fix. I should probably ...

Personally, that last idea with the new student seems very...anime-ish to me. I've seen a lot of animes where new characters from other worlds infiltrate by becoming students. However, that ...